Wednesday, October 7, 2015

first book chapter 11

Ok todays narration is that there isn't a narration the end.




The 20 pursuing divinations  decided to regroup in order to better deal with the remaining convoys. 15 were sent to deal with a convoy of 20,000 , and the remaining 5 were sent to destroy Aaron's convoy of 5'000. {You know what, i'm just going to number the battles ,and rely on the intelligence of the reader}.


The 15 divinations proceeded to attack 20k farmers, however the remaining farmers had ample time to craft weapons. They smelted down their tools to make spear tips {yes I know why on earth would they have smelters the answer they grabbed a few because it was obvious to them they would need it for just this situation} , and attached them to whatever poles they could find. They crafted armor from their most hardy straw ,and they reinforced it with flame and nylon. Finally when the moment came they took their wheels to use as shields. They charged at the divinations ,Their shield bought them precious seconds against their weapons.  The divinations struggled against the overwhelming numbers of the enemy. Eventually  the divination won but only by using all their energy. They were left incapacitated. Out of the farmers 439 escaped the blast. Seeing that their comrades had come so close to defeat the remaining 5 decided it  would be best to wait for reinforcements . by the time the remaining divinations came ,and they caught up with the final convoy again Aaron was just 53 minutes from awakening.

Monday, October 5, 2015

first book chapter 10

OK now then more torture :(. I have to wonder why the divinations take such pleasure in it ,but they do. anyways lets make some nightmares.


Another 50 were taken ,and put in some water tank. They filled the tanks with creatures , and removed the roof. They then proceeded to make it abundantly clear that if the creatures saw you move that they would eat you . The first people didn't believe it but after 17 deaths they were certain. finally they offered a chance at escape. If you stayed in there for 5 minutes they would let you out ,treat your wounds, give you some supplies, and send you on your merry way. Now then picture this you have to survive for 5 minutes underwater ,and if you move something eats you in a brutal manor. Anybody could realize it was impossible but they still tried.  One actually survived , the creatures were full and he could come up for air a few times before they were replaced with new ones. he was healed fully ,and went on as if never injured. If you don't get the point of this it's to give people hope only to have it all turned into nothing . That final moment is what makes this torture horrible.


The remaining 30 were considered special by them , and thusly given a special punishment. 27 of them were forced to kill each other. They had to kill each other brutally , if you killed 5 you you were safe. however to go free you had to eat the people you killed. {I would write this but its basically a more brutal less lengthily hunger games. So picture that now on to the final torture.}



The final 3 were then and put in cages. In the cages with them were beasts. No matter how much the beasts ate them they would not die or go into shock. But it was true agony.{if this seems familiar it's because it was once in hunterXhunter}. Well that's about it hope you enjoyed i'll go back to the story in the next chapter

Friday, October 2, 2015

first book chapter 9

OK then now that I set it up lets see some torture. Remember I am going to unleash every horrible thought i ever had ,and combine it. This is something i'll reread ,and question my sanity. If you can not sit through 5 minutes of the anime series gantz ,without wetting yourself don't read this. You have been warned

Now as to why I didn't include it last chapter i ran out of time. I only write this at school for the most part, so I have limitations (otherwise i'd have some serious shit going on lol). Now then enjoy the show.



The survivors were broken into groups based on reasons i can't understand.

Seventy of them were strapped down, and were skewered with needles. They made a game of how many you could put in before the person died. They took turns, a needle in the limbs one point, a needle in the stomach three points ,a needle in the chest five points ,and a needle in the neck or head 10 points. It was a slow and horrible torture that took hours to kill them.


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One-hundred-fifty of them were taken put in groups of three. Forced to watch as their friends and allies were put through the horrible torture that was made clear they would go through next.
Let me describe what happened to them as the others watched powerless. They were tied down and their fingers were cut off one by one, then the toes. They put knifes in every spot using a type anatomy  chart to prevent death. Every time they started to go into shock they were injected with a medicine that pulled them out of it. They poured maggots into the wounds , and centipedes into the ear. Then they slowly strangled him right until the point where they were about to pass out. Finally they ripped him apart.

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If you know history you know whats about to happen.



{ok i need a break this is making me feel cold writing it i'll make another one later}

Thursday, October 1, 2015

first book chapter 8

Ok remember that massacre i told you about, it's coming hide your children. I had to go to a dark place to think of this ,and frankly it scares even me so if you have a weak stomach get a bucket or leave now. This will be our October special.



It wasn't long before the divinations caught up with us. Aaron was still out cold, we had no choice we decided to split up the wagons ,and arm ourselves with whatever weapons we had. We would have to make sacrifice for the greater good. We cut off the divination's path to Aaron with one convoy ,and drew their focus with another. That was the plan at least...


The divinations caught up with the farmers 33 divinations verses the first convoy of 30,000 armed farmers. The farmer's front lines rushed the divination army ,and were instantly mowed down. Their remains were scattered. What was left of their organs there entrails and blood covered everything. Despite the makeshift commander's best efforts the farmer's army ran for their lives but were shot down only a few escaped. The divinations sent 5 soldiers to track down the survivors. Meanwhile all those who did not run away would meet a fate worse than death. The divinations easily neutralized the remaining 476 farmers with only one casualty ,and 2 injuries. They were captured alive. The divinations then sent  10 men to each convoy to finish off the remaining humans. Leaving 5 men to treat the injured ,and do unimaginable torture to the captured farmers. {i will now explain 5 methods of torture used in detail}




In chapter 9 {biggest cop out ever}






Wednesday, September 30, 2015

first book chapter 7

Now then here's a minecraft comparison of the kings gear, and description. If anyone has the orespawn mod with shields added. Picture full emerald gear and a diamond shield with all the enchants. As for what it looks like here's a picture. Actually screw it just picture the most stereotypical rune enchanted armor made of crystallized magic armor ever to be in Warcraft or some other MMORPG. As for the sword same thing only a sword. You notice the theme right what do you think the shield looks like. OK now then on to the battle.


Rushed by thirteen men the king put all his weight into holding his ground, his efforts failed and he staggered back. In the moment of weakness 5 divinations jumped into the air and attacked him. The king saw opportunity in this and unleashed his most powerful attack killing the 5 ,and diminishing the courage of the rest. As the enemy staggered back the king threw his sword at one threw his shield at another killing them ,and taking a weapon he found on one of the divinations he already killed. He may have won if not for one fatal flaw in his plan, the divination's weapons could only be used by them . The weapon infused with his DNA. Becoming a virus killing him in seconds in the most brutal way imaginable. His screams of agony could be heard for miles. In the end {i decided to make a more accurate estimate based on fluctuating odds} 33 divination soldiers remained. The king's sacrifice bought the remaining humans 3 hours of escape time.

Tuesday, September 29, 2015

first book chapter 6

OK just a heads u the farmers are helping Aaron escape. He is incapacitated right now he should wake up in about 3 days (the fighting lasted awhile the manna rejuvenation process takes 10 days). There is no way in hell that the king will hold off the escape for 3 days. So don't except plot convenience, {spoiler alert} expect a massacre. Also for future reference this reset human progress ,so after all this is over they go back to the stone age. All records of history were thoroughly destroyed by the divination. Its a conspiracy. plus its a parallel dimension ,and that's why this is possible. I'm telling you now so no one complains about the next books accuracy. Anyways  back to the story.


 The elite guard had enchanted katanas, made of a special diamond alloy.  Powerful enough to cut through a boulder with ease ,and diamond armor enchanted so as to allow movement and extra resistance. {You know how in minecraft how strong a god set is, picture that irl only katanas are better than swords}. Each part of the armor took a master craftsman 5 years to make. Once made it took a master forger 20 years to fuse the pieces together. Finally 30 years to enchant

 As for the swords ,it took 3 years to make the alloy, 10 years to make the sword ,and 20 years to enchant.{This is an estimate for both the armor and katanas}. However they were outnumbered ,and the remaining divination troops had gear almost as good as theirs.  {If you play minecraft imagine that the divination have stone swords and iron armor with all the enchants. If not then you wont really get it ,but lets just say that the difference is 2 attack and 2.5 armor bars. Which isn't that much considering the massive difference in troops.} Their formations collided and the armies separated each other. Each elite would face 4 divination ,and the king would face the remaining 13 alone. A battle for the ages { i'm going to ignore the human aspect here and pretend each elite fought the exact same battle}.





{here's the elite battle}.

The elite slashed at the divination in front twice killing him ,and was struck from behind by another of the divination soldiers. He reacted by swinging his blade in a circle. Killing one of them ,wounding another ,and the final one dodged and countered killing the elite. the uninjured divination then proceeded to heal the injured divination,{and thats why in the next chapter they wont help attack the king .

Monday, September 28, 2015

first book chapter 5

OK truth be told i had half a mind to cop out again but i won't anyways here's the battle.





While recovering from the laser's impact, he charged right at me. With no time to react I instinctively put up a shield. It shattered instantly leaving me defenseless he attacked me savagely leaving me no time to recover, and with my energy drained i couldn't pull off a major attack. My only option was retreat. So i pooled all my remaining energy in order to do a zoom spell. I went back to the citadel it was still being repaired luckily my constant attacks against the divination armies kept them busy but i doubt they'll let me recover in peace. {realized I should write more} In no more than 3 days the remaining divination armies reached our gates. For once we outnumbered them 10'000 to 300. However with our defenses diminished ,and me incapacitated it would not be an easy battle. The king rallied the troops archers a volley of arrows shot at the divination. But their armor held strong , and less than 30 were killed. The remaining troops mowed down our infantry like cattle. 177 divanation troops fought against 5000 cavalry men. It was hard fought and we managed to decrease their numbers to 73, but we were out of troops all that were left to defend us were farmers. It was then that the king decided to make a mass retreat. So him ,and his 15 elite guard went to fight against 73 divanation troops, to hold them off till the last man died. Too be continued...